Sample Of Book - Second Try ; )

[Mosby 355]

Coallie

The cold pipe was not what interested Coallie, but rather the warm stink that came from it. She squeezed with all her pent frustration to enter the cramped space. She had done it dozens of times; her ancestors had done it millions more. This is what she was meant to do. This is what she lived and breathed for. She was full of a fire that could not be extinguished, only dampened. Only action could satisfy, only action could calm her rage.

The fire burnt her insides up. She pushed and pulled her way into the irrigation pipe. She could see movement down the tube and knew... Her adversary was lying in wait there. Too confident in it's safety within the pipe to run and thus face the man outside, it opted to lay, mouth open, waiting for Coallie, the little hairy dog, to meet it in mouth to mouth combat.

That time soon came. Coallie met the initial strike with the side of her face, yowling her anger loudly for all to hear. The unseen enemy jabbed and reversed, jabbed and reversed. Coallie knew the routine. She pushed with the side of her face, pushed, pushed. She was stronger than the sharp toothed foe, both in spirit and in mouth. She could take the pain. She loved the pain. Work is what kept her life force burning. This is what she needed to do. One final jab and Coallie felt her opportunity. The lamb worrying fox had lunged too far. Coallie grabbed it by the side of the neck and shook with all her might.

The two combatants twirled and turned like tight woven wire in a small space. Each trying for an advantage; Coallie, being the only one finding true footing. Using her weight, she punished the animal into understanding it’s position. It could not win. It could understand that. At first feeling of Coallie’s mouth slipping, it pulled away with all the force it could muster. Backing away swiftly and out of reach, it made sure that Coallie’s desires were frustrated. Coallie let out bark after bark letting the man outside know the game was out of reach.

Light shone into the tunnel. Red fur flashed from the tube, bolting into the open. BOOM! BOOM! Two shots rang out and hummed through the pipe. Coallie exited to sniff out the carcass of the pheasant killer. In the open, she triumphantly ragged the wooly carcass in her mouth. That warm fox stink she so loved filled her mouth. Another morning, another wound, another dead foe. And it’s all chalked up to...

Grit

[Zilverhaze 1,627]

Good read that mate found my self scrolling dowe on the phone looking for the grit chapter then realised it was a taster lol

[Omanyra 2,518]

Not a bad read matie, and you will be dying to get your book ready

I can see what your trying to do, but be VERY careful putting samples up

Thanks for sharing this

Hope you do well with it

[leethedog 3,071]

Well written I enjoyed that will it come out in both book and ebook form

[BlackBuck 655]

First class read , very well written . Looking forward to the book

[shovel 160]

Very good read.best of luck with the book.

[dillydog 8,417]

The first bit read like soft porn, I couldn't read anymore, I got disappointed when I realised it was about dogs :-)

Edited October 19, 2015 by dillydog

[air gun ant 1,666]

Enjoyed that mate

[Mosby 355]

Thanks folks. I will have it out as a physical book for a while before I do an ebook.

 

DillyDog, this was Grit. If you want the soft porn stuff, you'll have to read my other book... Tit

[Lenmcharristar 9,183]

Thanks folks. I will have it out as a physical book for a while before I do an ebook.

DillyDog, this was Grit. If you want the soft porn stuff, you'll have to read my other book... Tit

much are ya selling the book for?

[Mosby 355]

It's not finished yet, LenM. I've had to rewrite a few sections, then formatting. Then when the cover is done, it'll be available.

[dillydog 8,417]

Thanks folks. I will have it out as a physical book for a while before I do an ebook.

DillyDog, this was Grit. If you want the soft porn stuff, you'll have to read my other book... Tit

Now now Howard, don't let the English sense of humour get you down. Good luck with the book and don't take anything to heart that you see on here.

[Mosby 355]

The other book is titled "Tit" I wasn't calling you a tit lol.

Man, a person can get themselves in trouble on here.

[Oldandknackered 48]

lol brill lol maybe a new nickname for dd(only joking lol)

tell you what mosby , putting your own writing on a public forum for comments....xxxxing hell mate, you must have the balls of a supergod, lol big respect from me. atb and good luck with it.

[Omanyra 2,518]

Do you have a publisher, or are you going to do it yourself?

Just wondering, as I have 4 on the go, 2 on ratting with terriers, one about all round lurchers breeding and working and a new one for me, a sort of confessions of a mole man, plenty of SEX....two I hope to have finished next year

The terrier ones Ive had knocked back by a publisher, so I was thinking of doing it by myself. A publisher contact would be useful if you have one..

Edited October 20, 2015 by Omanyra