socks 32,253 Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Flash of teeth, white hot pain Yet on he pushes time and again No guiding light, no masters’ hand He’s on his own in this barren land. His chest is heavy, his breath running short He can’t stop now until his enemy’s caught He hears the digging and the sound of his name Not long now and he will be safe again He holds on tight, he cant let go For his enemy is strong, of that he knows He can feel him tire his pulse grows deep He feels his enemy slip into eternal sleep The battles over the deed is done No need for hands or masters gun light floods in and all is calm He’s lifted into his masters’ arm Well-done lad a pat on the head Then home for a feed and a welcoming bed He rests and heals and forgets the pain And waits for his turn to enter earths bowels again Quote Link to post
Guest little lurcher Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Fu*king excellent mate !! you write that yourself? Quote Link to post
sue 1 Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 (edited) thats excellent mate Edited May 31, 2008 by sue Quote Link to post
socks 32,253 Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Fu*king excellent mate !! you write that yourself? yhea wrote that a few years back ............. Quote Link to post
justin 2 Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 touched the soft spot mate...fair play, brilliant Quote Link to post
earth&hounds 94 Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 brill mate keep it up Quote Link to post
Guest friedrice Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 cani have a go. on he goes the layzy slob,no intensions of doing his job, no work at all within we see,just another bumbled breed. enter he will without a care,dont give a feck what foe was there,bark and bay for all he's worth but he'll shift nowt from this big old earth. another bad one from this line, and god we get them from time to time,but hope will bring one good one day,and maybe we could change some ways but till that day we will go on .and hope for the ones that have been long gone. the old ones keep us getting by,and without the young men the sport would die. thats my first poem ever but it sounds ok i think, and makes sence a bit Quote Link to post
earth&hounds 94 Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 cani have a go.on he goes the layzy slob,no intensions of doing his job, no work at all within we see,just another bumbled breed. enter he will without a care,dont give a feck what foe was there,bark and bay for all he's worth but he'll shift nowt from this big old earth. another bad one from this line, and god we get them from time to time,but hope will bring one good one day,and maybe we could change some ways but till that day we will go on .and hope for the ones that have been long gone. the old ones keep us getting by,and without the young men the sport would die. thats my first poem ever but it sounds ok i think, and makes sence a bit poet and did not now it well done mate Quote Link to post
Tracy36 0 Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 a swell to my bussom and a tear in my eyes for noble working dog!!! quite moving socks Quote Link to post
Brummy 9 Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Says it all really............ Quote Link to post
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