heres the two im going to be using
Dear Sir or Madam:
First of all, I would like to take this chance to thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I am writing to enquire whether there is any opportunity for pest control on your land free of charge.
My name is ----- --------; I am -- years old, I am from ----------. I have been ferreting -- years and I would appreciate it if I could use your land to clear it of pests e.g. Rabbits, Rats or any other pest you would like taking of your land.
With this in mind, I feel that I can be of assistance to you, should you offer